“Macie, if you do anything bad now, it will affect you in the future. Just try it if you want to,” said Mr. Fawn. “I know! Since little Macie is only a few years younger than me, I will give her a minor burn,” decided Macie. “Macie, dear,” said big Macie, “Do you want to come with me?” Little Macie nodded. They walked toward a dimly lit area, and big Macie lit a candle. Then she pressed it against little Macie’s arm. “Ah!” she screamed. “Ouch!” “Now, let’s get out of here,” suggested Mr. Fawn, “And when we go back to the future, you should see a burn on your arm.”
Macie went back to her future home, and she saw a strange spot on her arm. “Amazing!” she squealed. She decided to go to Willow’s. “Willow! I know where your father is!” Macie exclaimed. “Macie?” Willow rolled her eyes. “My father can’t possibly be alive! That’s just crazy!”
Macie and Willow walked through the woods, where Mr. Fawn was sitting on a tree stump. “Father! I can’t believe it’s you! And mother was right, the music meant you were coming!” shouted Willow. “Willow,” said Mr. Fawn. “Please leave your mother. She is the one who stopped our rain. Come with Macie and I, because we are going to a beautiful place, which I own.”
Macie, Willow, and Mr. Fawn walked through the woods. “Welcome,” said Mr. Fawn, “To past Blue Sea City. Here, we have stepped into the past and will continue the future later.” “But,” Macie argued, “I don’t want to live here. I like the future.” Mr. Fawn nodded. “Okay,” he said. “We can live at my cousin’s in New York City. It’s not too far from here.”
They drove to New York. “Wow,” gasped Macie. “This place is so crowded!” “Hey Macie, aren’t you going back to live with your parents?” asked Willow. “No, probably not, I think I’ll like it here with you guys. And, it rains here! I will also change my name to Macie Fawn.”
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